Assalamualaikum...
After first presentation, my group need to be choose another site because our site focus on building only.
We need to focus on whole of Gurney Paragon that included Condominium, Shopping Mall, and St. Jo heritage building.
After that presentation on Friday, lecturers agree and we will continue to next presentation, Evaluation of Project.
This is my first slide:
This slide explain likely on our first presentation, there are our proposed site and some information about
Gurney Paragon.
For the second slide, we planned to put some of definition about Paragon concept and its concepts element, but we don't have enough of space because explanation for our evaluation too long, yeahh... its should be in points....
[ Before]
[ After]
Comment for slide 2 (after) :
1. Did not mention the concept of Gurney Paragon,
2. There are no explanation about the concept and its element concept.
3. Need to explain the function/ arrow that drew. ( * I done by myself, I want to explain its connection between its landuse and it is show the entrance that located for visitor that come in/ inside of this area )
and this it ours final slide:
Comments:
1. To many words and just reading on the screen
2. The evaluation should/ better in the table that comparing between concept by developer Vs evaluation after complete for development.
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